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Stardust

has blinded many a soul ~ none more than rocket man north of seoul Stardust Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul Howmanysyllables (17) 04/14/23

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:25:00 PM

Very creative indeed. Making a bold statement. Congrats for your win

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/1/2023 12:48:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, ain’t that the truth, I enjoyed writing this one, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a great/blessed weekend.............

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/29/2023 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula, I’m delighted as always to get a mention, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/29/2023 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations on you honorable mention! You speak the truth

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/29/2023 8:50:00 AM

Heya Anaya, I do try to be truthful, painful as that may be, thanks so much for stopping by, I kinda like this one, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 7:29:00 AM

Hi David, Congratulation on your HM. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/29/2023 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, I’m delighted with the H/M, esp on this controversial piece, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2023 3:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your H/M poem, David :) - hugs

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/29/2023 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, this one was always risky, it’s brutally honest but the truth nonetheless, cheers David

Paul Bell

Date: 4/17/2023 8:47:00 AM

Someday he'll come flying over tied to a rocket, and the world will at least get a laugh.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/17/2023 11:02:00 AM

It would be great to see the back of him on a rocket, not his backside though, oh you know what I mean, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/15/2023 5:06:00 PM

There are some dam funny cartoons...[Funny Kim Jong Un Cartoons and images] on the internet. b0l

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/16/2023 1:06:00 AM

I must check them out Anaya, this one is purely metaphorical for the contest, I could’ve gone a lot harder on him, and probably will at some stage in the future, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/14/2023 5:17:00 PM

Hi David, You have penned such a well-written and revalent one-liner. I echo them below. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/15/2023 12:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis, I had the first part written ~ then I went off on a tangent into this one, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/14/2023 12:52:00 PM

I couldn't agree more David especially in his case. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/14/2023 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Tom, I feel so bad for the millions that are persecuted by him and his goons every day of their lives, what a nightmare they have to live through, cheers David

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/14/2023 11:56:00 AM

Isn't that the truth David! Great one! Best wishes for the contest. Cheers!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/14/2023 12:00:00 PM

Heya Sam, I really don’t think this one is up for debate, but you never know maybe he has one supporter out there, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2023 11:03:00 AM

- Great written, David - Good luck in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/14/2023 11:57:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I think a lot of obvious truth behind this one, I’m sure most people will get it, enjoy the weekend too, cheers David