Stardust

This plume of mortal breath—
mere puffs of silver smoke
beneath a vast, bespangled sky.
The moon, close and looming,
sheds eerie light in a lustrous beam, 
while motes of delicate stardust,
like specks of a thousand dreams,
dance in its lucent path 
to eternity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 11:09 AM
Very beautiful! Gotta love stars! Nice imagery.
Rolland Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:45 PM
so refreshing painting, brilliant images to be loved, thanks yann
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