Stardom

Star
Shine on
Shine upon
Me, in the night
Sparkling in my dreams
Show me, to look above
Lead me, where I need to be
I want to be able to to see
Hope from your stardom, shining in dark
To uplift my spirit......................forever free

Heidi Sands

4/9/22
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wolf Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Sweetly penned, Heidi! Aim for those stars! ~ Gershon
Sands Avatar
April 13, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Gershon! I hope you have a nice evening :)
Gentile Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Heidi, this is lovely and hopeful! Look to the stars, they will lead you. Beautiful thoughts, Happy Tuesday xxoo
Sands Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Mike. Enjoy! Happy Tuesday :)
Tomeo Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 12:31 AM
Wow so beautiful and inspiring Heidi!!! Loved it , the stars like the moon are magical beings. Thanks for your writings!
Sands Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 5:34 AM
Thank you very much Walter :)
Kalita Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 7:41 AM
I wish I can write a etheree like you, so serene, enlightenment and divine, a feast to the soul.
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 2:46 PM
I am sure you can Silpika. I had never done this form or many others, until coming to this site, but I had to practice with them. Thank you for your kind comment! I hope you have a nice evening :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:21 AM
Divine prayer, my dearest friend, Heidi! God bless you. Happy Palms Sunday!
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:51 AM
Thank you Demetrios. Happy Palms Sunday :)
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 3:32 AM
May you find your star shining bright with hope and joy, Heidi, very serene:)
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Thank you so much Jo. I hope you have a nice day :)
Poet Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 7:58 PM
Love it, Heidi. You lovely crafted this Etheree shining in happiness and grace. Blessings
Sands Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thank you. I am happy to hear that. I appreciate your kind feedback :)
May Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 4:21 PM
Finding your guiding star, Nicely penned Heidi..
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Yes Joseph. Thank you. Goodnight :)
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:48 PM
Lovely poem Heidi. Shining in joyous spirits--indeed uplifting!
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 6:05 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. It was something that was coming to mind as I went to bed lastnight. I appreciate your kind, positive comment :)
Mcintosh Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 2:53 PM
Love this. Gorgeous writing. God bless you. Love, Gina
Sands Avatar
April 9, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Thank you so much Gina. I am happy to hear that. Blessings. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace