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Star-Crossed Lovers

Written: September 1st, 2023                              
Star-Crossed Lovers Poetry Contest -- Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori   
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Let's claim a trip across the Milky Way.
We'll be the era's most star-crossed couple.
The Sun's drips as they detect a flawless sky; 
Away we journeyed yet close to seraphic supple.

Star-forded lovers claimed to be holy ghosts.
We flew across the moon and played near Saturn.
Until I met you that day, life was a little lost.
Was love or pain the result of a rainy pattern? 
  
For ages, we were kids who never spat or cried.
It is unclear how quickly this love will have died.
I doubt it, given our status as star-crossed lovers.
A lover's fate is never heard beyond gilded covers.

We were the ones who lit the embers of love.
When we lock lips, it's such a sparkler shove.
Proud holders of love's endless happiness.
Clouds represent the ebb and flow of bliss.
 
Akin to Adam and Eve first breach, it is timeless.
Yet we loved first. I didn't ever feel that tideness.
Can this genuinely happen without you?
In that case, this whole existence means a hue.

You gave me wings to soar to the heavens.
I reckon we're cute—you gave me rapture.
You widened my heart to the point of rupture.
Rhymes are worthless if graced by your presence.
 
We adore regardless of our star-crossed sway.
Our love will be a myth as we sail by the Milky Way.
Death-stained lovers lying beneath thick covers
Love whispers vibrate miles apart, drawing us smothers.

We waltz around Saturn hand in hand.
Leaping above the moon, a stellar band
Life was monotonous until that awful day.
When our souls sparred in a cosmic display.

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Valsa George September 5, 2023 at 2:05 AM Back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your well deserved win. Go ahead of the pack in your great poetic journey, dear friend !

Speaks Volumes September 4, 2023 at 5:57 PM Congratulations for your placement dear one. Your poem excelled I am still smiling having read it again just now. I am sure you are too.

Jay Narain September 2, 2023 at 10:50 AM Beautiful poem. Takes us from earth to cosmos and beyond to feel the heartfelt love. GL in contest.

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2023 at 9:09 AM Ahhh!! "When our souls sparred in a cosmic display." Well, I wonder sometimes is the universe or galaxy is as colorful and beautiful when one is actually out there in it. Someday when I pass through, I guess I will know. Thanks for sharing this romantic one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ink Empress September 2, 2023 at 4:07 AM Sometimes as i read your poems, i wonder, do you ever run out of words and rhymes? What a profound and moving write is this. Was love or pain the result of a rainy pattern? Wow! That line stood out for me and so much more especially the opening, the galactic and stellar wordplay and diction truly is impeccable. A cosmic display of star crossed lovers, you’ve depicted with such artistic imagery from your brilliant storytelling. Another fave for me

Speaks Volumes September 2, 2023 at 3:13 AM Breathtaking poetry. Making the entire universe their playground, how can such matter when love is so strong. Just beautiful Lasaard,

Valsa George September 1, 2023 at 11:38 PM "We adore regardless of our star-crossed sway. Our love will be a myth as we sail by the Milky Way. Death-stained lovers lying beneath thick covers" Though they couldn't come together in life, they are eternally united and they soar above the elements celebrating their love. Wonderfully penned and greatly emotive, dear friend .