Starburst

Purple orange light painting fiery pregnant horizon
Blood-moon slides behind the red yellow sun
Enchanting sky births eclipse a black monsoon.







FOR SIJO CONTEST             SPONSOR WILLIAM KEKAULA
10/4/2021
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Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 1:55 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:03 PM
I appreciate that Sara.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 12:25 AM
A color-filled depiction, Karen, a tasty treat at that! Nicely done my friend, Aloha!
Jones Avatar
October 14, 2021 at 1:22 AM
Thanks William. It's exciting that you read it!
Green Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Wonderfully written, best wishes in the contest
Jones Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:26 PM
THANKS! Just looking at your work and I love how versatile you are. Wow. What a huge talent you possess.
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