Starburst

Purple orange light painting fiery pregnant horizon Blood-moon slides behind the red yellow sun Enchanting sky births eclipse a black monsoon. FOR SIJO CONTEST SPONSOR WILLIAM KEKAULA 10/4/2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2021 1:55:00 PM

I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2021 2:03:00 PM

I appreciate that Sara.

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/14/2021 12:25:00 AM

A color-filled depiction, Karen, a tasty treat at that! Nicely done my friend, Aloha!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/14/2021 1:22:00 AM

Thanks William. It's exciting that you read it!

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2021 2:25:00 PM

Wonderfully written, best wishes in the contest

Karen Jones
Date: 10/4/2021 7:26:00 PM

THANKS! Just looking at your work and I love how versatile you are. Wow. What a huge talent you possess.