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Star Wars Revisited

I watched this strange flick while I was a young chick Involving space and futuristic beings So many handsome men creating steam Two men it seemed in love with she This beauty with coils, eyes like the sea I dreamt of just being in her shoes Traveling in spaceships, a robot her muse The quirky suitors,adventure, a theme Such cool vehicles and speeders, my dream Blasters and hover crafts, Jedi knights Carrying strange tools called lightsabers to fight Adventure, love story all together as one Incredible theme with loads of fun Names such as Solo, Yoda and Hut Tatooine, star fighters, storm troopers that strut This incredible adventure I watched as a teen Continued its stories for years it did seem My child, a son one day he was born Played with many of these figures outside on the lawn The stories continued so much we could share A mother, a son at the screen we would stare At night I would read these stories of knights Traveling, chasing Darth Vadar to fight I loved Naboo, Anakin, r2, and more Each story captivating us,always wanting more But sadly my child has become a young teen Occasionally storm trooper figures are seen See this story of Star Wars can draw us in No matter our ages, the Jedi will win I can watch the movies over and over it seems For becoming a Jedi knight is one of my dreams Jennifer Marie Stars Wars Legacy Shared

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Date: 9/8/2013 2:43:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/6/2013 9:25:00 AM
HI JENNIFER, yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not.CONGRATS! Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2013 11:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:06:00 PM
Jennifer, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer
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Date: 8/12/2013 12:42:00 AM
Star Wars Rules
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