Star Wars

STAR WARS Secrets of love within your heart Truly shown in your eyes every time you smile And the moment you give me a kiss Rolling thunder to my heart exists! Win or defeated, conquered or triumphed Always faithful, allegiance is sure Rely on me, whenever you fell and wounded So many nights I pray that you come back to continue the love we left behind...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/25/2024 7:34:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2016 6:58:00 PM

Jun Tumalad, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2016 5:11:00 PM

such a deep write. skat