Star Troubadour

STAR TROUBADOUR

Who    in noontime blaze
Comes singing of left
                                   right
                                           above places
    of reality    time-frozen
                         moment of clarity
                                     a moment lost    but gained?

Star-troubadour
    blessed     with revelation
                 with Earth-blind devotion
Comes singing
I  catch his song on the fringe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 7:07 AM
I am not familiar with the song but know that a troubadour is one who sings poetry like lyrics to entertain..I will have to look up Star Troubadour...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Chiccory Coffee"..My favorite aunt she died with something called multiple myeloma at the age of 80..Sara
Mac Donald Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Oh, I think I know who this "TROUBADOUR" is, but truth be told, I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed. Thanks for the comment on 'Fanfare'...it was about that friction between Rosey O'donnel and Mr Trump. You must have heard them rattling each other's skeleton in the closet? Anyhow all seems alright, and Trump feels to run for president. I won't blast a might-be president, for sure! Love, Mikki
Peranteau Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 7:23 AM
I felt your momentum dear poet, and the write, pretty dang good ! Have a bright day Dave...much love, james
K. Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 1:04 AM
Now I am curious as well as to who this star-troubador is, Daver... very interesting write-- and I sure wish all the best goes into your surgery for you left eye-- don't strain your right eye too much, but I am glad that the surgery for your right eye went fine-- I won't be here as much but I wanted you to know how much I appreciate all your comments and insights, ^_^ thank you so much & hugs your way-- btw that was about my computer mouse...I am glad you don't have meeses at home! Hugs :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Now who might be this star troubadour? Someone from American Idol? heehee (I know how you hate that show( An intereseting poem, Sir daver!
Guzzi Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 6:12 PM
wonder who or what he is?? hmmm Light & Love
Foulk Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 11:56 AM
very creative, enjoyed reading this one Daver, you did it again, great write.
A   Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Good morning, Daver.. a star to brighten the moment.. you have me in great wonders.. always... a great one,..p.d.
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Every now and then I catch a few "revelations" from the "star troubadour," Daver. I am always so glad when I get these messages that seem to be moments of clarity in a chaotic world. I saw James Peranteau's poem and your remarks. I'm not sure I understood his poem, but he blind-sides me sometimes. Love from naive Nellie
Mac Donald Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Hi Daver! Oie yoie...this certainly takes one for a musical mind spin. You are more clever than I with your ideas! Thanks for your comments, though today I feel as though most are like brain hiccups. Still, I'm grateful for your kind comments, thank you! Best to you and yours! Love, Mikki
Sweetheart Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 7:41 AM
I am sure I have heard his song James and it is as lovely as your creative write today.. star troubadour reminds me of a light hearted person who goes around spreading good cheer with his rhapsodies.. and melodies.. always enjoy your flowing lilting lines luv..
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