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Star Troubadour

STAR TROUBADOUR Who in noontime blaze Comes singing of left right above places of reality time-frozen moment of clarity a moment lost but gained? Star-troubadour blessed with revelation with Earth-blind devotion Comes singing I catch his song on the fringe

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2011 7:07:00 AM

I am not familiar with the song but know that a troubadour is one who sings poetry like lyrics to entertain..I will have to look up Star Troubadour...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Chiccory Coffee"..My favorite aunt she died with something called multiple myeloma at the age of 80..Sara

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/6/2011 2:41:00 PM

Oh, I think I know who this "TROUBADOUR" is, but truth be told, I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed. Thanks for the comment on 'Fanfare'...it was about that friction between Rosey O'donnel and Mr Trump. You must have heard them rattling each other's skeleton in the closet? Anyhow all seems alright, and Trump feels to run for president. I won't blast a might-be president, for sure! Love, Mikki

James Peranteau

Date: 5/4/2011 7:23:00 AM

I felt your momentum dear poet, and the write, pretty dang good ! Have a bright day Dave...much love, james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/3/2011 1:04:00 AM

Now I am curious as well as to who this star-troubador is, Daver... very interesting write-- and I sure wish all the best goes into your surgery for you left eye-- don't strain your right eye too much, but I am glad that the surgery for your right eye went fine-- I won't be here as much but I wanted you to know how much I appreciate all your comments and insights, ^_^ thank you so much & hugs your way-- btw that was about my computer mouse...I am glad you don't have meeses at home! Hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2011 10:15:00 PM

Now who might be this star troubadour? Someone from American Idol? heehee (I know how you hate that show( An intereseting poem, Sir daver!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/2/2011 6:12:00 PM

wonder who or what he is?? hmmm Light & Love

James Foulk

Date: 5/2/2011 11:56:00 AM

very creative, enjoyed reading this one Daver, you did it again, great write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2011 10:24:00 AM

Good morning, Daver.. a star to brighten the moment.. you have me in great wonders.. always... a great one,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/2/2011 9:45:00 AM

Every now and then I catch a few "revelations" from the "star troubadour," Daver. I am always so glad when I get these messages that seem to be moments of clarity in a chaotic world. I saw James Peranteau's poem and your remarks. I'm not sure I understood his poem, but he blind-sides me sometimes. Love from naive Nellie

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/2/2011 7:56:00 AM

Hi Daver! Oie yoie...this certainly takes one for a musical mind spin. You are more clever than I with your ideas! Thanks for your comments, though today I feel as though most are like brain hiccups. Still, I'm grateful for your kind comments, thank you! Best to you and yours! Love, Mikki

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/2/2011 7:41:00 AM

I am sure I have heard his song James and it is as lovely as your creative write today.. star troubadour reminds me of a light hearted person who goes around spreading good cheer with his rhapsodies.. and melodies.. always enjoy your flowing lilting lines luv..