Star Trek Stinker

a place of peaceful rest
from cursing…reversed
in Paramount Plus

gun slinging verbiage —
trashing the Most Holy’s name

in Star Trek IV, Nimoy
was given his lines —

exposé of colorful language
not heard of in their age

now Picard is old
and the old returns

to the silver-lie-zed screen
screaming in our faces

like overdue feces
a species showing its true colors

unfortunately…throw in sex scenes too
nothing unimagined, nothing civilized,
only the dematerialization

of minds. And the startup
of this series…i’m yawning

nothing like the lively action
of the past. evolution seems
to be a blast from the past.

am i picking on Picard?
why call him JL,
when Jean-Luc

sounded so much cooler
ooh…ooh let me answer this!
it’s a prelude to disaster
of epic proportions 

will mankind be saved this time
in the nick of time

the Captain’s apt to fail
his dog is “number one”
his predecessor in spot two
they are in doo doo

bring back a place of peaceful rest -
it’s paramount to reverse
the cursing, the death
of good old-fashioned fun 

3/8/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 12:52 PM
This is sad "unfortunately…throw in sex scenes too nothing unimagined, nothing civilized, only the dematerialization" but well said.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Several episodes in, a little bit better but other shows are still so much better!
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Never was a 'Trekkie' at all, but I can just imagine how much worse it will be this time around... Kinda like bringing up TV dinners again... ~ Mrs. Swanson
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 7:28 PM
Beam me up, Scottie…well really no, not that k8nd of show…more like a soap opera
Cheney Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 12:05 PM
What? Have they ruined Star Trek?
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Certainly not as good. We will see if it picks up.
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 11:24 AM
You know what Kim, Q was my favourite character from the Star Trek series, is it a God checking in on humanity from time to time, or some malevolent demon, maybe this old Picard, will finally get the answers but I won’t hold my breath, or maybe I will it does stink a bit, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 12:53 PM
So far not very satisfying. We will see. Q is supposed to be in second season.
Leffanta Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 10:34 AM
I don't really pay attention as my only interest is in ogling Seven-of-Nine, but your review sounds thorough! Aloha!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 10:58 AM
LOL…saw 7 of 9 yesterday.
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