Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Star Sugar

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl

to dust the skies from some great height!

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light,

you sweeten up my somber night.

Delight the lone and searching soul,

oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light

like crystals emptied from a bowl.

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Line Gauthier April 13, 2018 at 10:03 PM An exquisite poem and the form enhances the imagery beautifully, Andrea.

Carole Duet September 28, 2017 at 4:02 PM This is so lovely, Andrea. It paints such a beautiful (sky)word picture in my mind and makes me like the triolet.

Robin Davis April 28, 2014 at 10:37 PM Andrea What a very descriptive and imaginative poem that "sparkles" with creativity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my If I Were A Man poem. Yes, it is entered in the contest just for fun. Hugs

Heather Ober June 14, 2013 at 7:12 AM You are an absolute master of imagery, my friend! Reading this one made my morning. I'm going to have to try this form... You are filling up my faves page!

Sara Kendrick May 9, 2013 at 10:32 AM Congrats on this great win about those great stars..Sara

Red Omara May 7, 2013 at 10:50 PM Congratulations, Andrea. Another typically beautiful offering. You flatter the stars. - Red

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2013 at 10:02 PM ANDREA, a nice winning poem once again.... PD

Jack Jordan May 7, 2013 at 6:36 PM Beautiful work! Congrats on your win. Much deserved... Jack

Therese Bacha May 6, 2013 at 9:38 PM Beautiful Andrea, loved reading it. Congratulations, see u...Love Terry xoxoxo

Carrie Richards May 6, 2013 at 7:19 PM You are the star on the top of the Soup!! You shine!!!

Abdul Malik Mandani May 6, 2013 at 3:57 PM On second thought, maybe, I would say ...like crystals emptied from a Cauldron! Have to cover a very large area, you know.

Abdul Malik Mandani May 6, 2013 at 3:38 PM "..like crystals emptied from a bowl" very imaginative! I should have written this line. Nice write.

Ray Dillard May 6, 2013 at 12:21 PM One star-gazer to another, I love your poem. RAY

Painted Hunter May 6, 2013 at 5:58 AM Congrats on the win, Andrea...sweet like suga'...I love it!

Afroze Ali May 6, 2013 at 1:22 AM I like how soul and bowl rhyme. who would have thought but you...congratulations again

Connie Marcum Wong May 5, 2013 at 11:27 PM Wow Andrea. You have magic powers to be able to enter so many contests and keep up on so many replies. A real beauty with this win and in first place. Kudos!

Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 10:21 PM Oh Andrea...the title alone is a great poem....congratulations

Joyce Johnson May 5, 2013 at 9:14 PM Very nice Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Therese Bacha May 5, 2013 at 12:02 PM Hello Andrea, really a very well deserved win amazing. Goes to fav. and a 7>>>>> see you later. Love Terry xoxoxoxo

Therese Bacha May 5, 2013 at 12:02 PM Forgot the the 7>>>

Skat A March 7, 2013 at 11:14 AM nice Andrea~Yours truly *SKAT

Carrie Richards March 2, 2013 at 8:59 AM Such a lovely triolet, Andrea.....this one sparkles just like your personality! Congrats!!

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 9:09 PM Andrea, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Charles Clive January 29, 2012 at 3:42 AM Wonderful. I love it. A beautiful piece, congratulations. Charles.

Cecilia Macfarlane January 25, 2012 at 8:09 PM A sparkling win Andrea....congrats!

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