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Star Sugar

Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light like crystals emptied from a bowl to dust the skies from some great height! Oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light, you sweeten up my somber night. Delight the lone and searching soul, oh, scattered flecks that sparkle light like crystals emptied from a bowl.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/13/2018 10:03:00 PM

An exquisite poem and the form enhances the imagery beautifully, Andrea.

Carole Duet

Date: 9/28/2017 4:02:00 PM

This is so lovely, Andrea. It paints such a beautiful (sky)word picture in my mind and makes me like the triolet.

Robin Davis

Date: 4/28/2014 10:37:00 PM

Andrea What a very descriptive and imaginative poem that "sparkles" with creativity and charm. Thank you for the nice comment on my If I Were A Man poem. Yes, it is entered in the contest just for fun. Hugs

Heather Ober

Date: 6/14/2013 7:12:00 AM

You are an absolute master of imagery, my friend! Reading this one made my morning. I'm going to have to try this form... You are filling up my faves page!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/9/2013 10:32:00 AM

Congrats on this great win about those great stars..Sara

Red Omara

Date: 5/7/2013 10:50:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea. Another typically beautiful offering. You flatter the stars. - Red

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2013 10:02:00 PM

ANDREA, a nice winning poem once again.... PD

Jack Jordan

Date: 5/7/2013 6:36:00 PM

Beautiful work! Congrats on your win. Much deserved... Jack

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/6/2013 9:38:00 PM

Beautiful Andrea, loved reading it. Congratulations, see u...Love Terry xoxoxo

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/6/2013 7:19:00 PM

You are the star on the top of the Soup!! You shine!!!

Abdul Malik

Date: 5/6/2013 3:57:00 PM

On second thought, maybe, I would say ...like crystals emptied from a Cauldron! Have to cover a very large area, you know.

Abdul Malik

Date: 5/6/2013 3:38:00 PM

"..like crystals emptied from a bowl" very imaginative! I should have written this line. Nice write.

Ray Dillard

Date: 5/6/2013 12:21:00 PM

One star-gazer to another, I love your poem. RAY

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/6/2013 5:58:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Andrea...sweet like suga'...I love it!

Afroze Ali

Date: 5/6/2013 1:22:00 AM

I like how soul and bowl rhyme. who would have thought but you...congratulations again

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/5/2013 11:27:00 PM

Wow Andrea. You have magic powers to be able to enter so many contests and keep up on so many replies. A real beauty with this win and in first place. Kudos!