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Star Struck

Oh gentle breeze whispering Upon my face as I lay here on The golden sands of nectar Sweet.Bathing in the sun With its glorious rays of Warmth covering my body. Timeless shadows cast the Earth to bring cool of day. Hazed outlines sail the seas, Far on horizons seascape.; A distant memory of fun And laughter waving g'bye. They were happy and gay. Champagne flowed and Song was in the air. Son Betrothed to Moon, and Moon betrothed to Son. I stayed until dusk and Thought what a wonder- Ful world. Star Struck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2015 4:32:00 AM
fantastic imagery Eddie love your poem hugs 7
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Edwardj Clark
Date: 6/17/2015 12:22:00 PM
Hi Shadow, thanks for your kind comment. Yes, I wrote it very quickly using my imagination. There are so many bad things happening in he world today so I thought why not add some light into it Edward

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