Star Struck

Oh gentle breeze whispering
Upon my face as I lay here on
The golden sands of nectar
Sweet.Bathing in the sun

With its glorious rays of
Warmth covering my body.
Timeless shadows cast the
Earth to bring cool of day.

Hazed outlines sail the seas,
Far on horizons seascape.; 
A distant memory of fun
And laughter waving g'bye.

They were happy and gay.
Champagne flowed and
Song was in the air. Son
Betrothed to Moon, and

Moon betrothed to Son.
I stayed until dusk and
Thought what a wonder-
Ful world. Star Struck
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 4:32 AM
fantastic imagery Eddie love your poem hugs 7
Clark Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Hi Shadow, thanks for your kind comment. Yes, I wrote it very quickly using my imagination. There are so many bad things happening in he world today so I thought why not add some light into it Edward
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