Star Shot

She exemplifies stardust upon my eyes
As the sky brightens by its passing
Shooting across my tender thoughts
In between the heart of gold and love
She states she saw something standing
Right where the star landed downward
It was me in my only brightened color
Brought upon by the light of the star
I was washed in the reflection of the water
Where shining brightly was the powerful
Light from above, and she shows it
Gracefully, my life enlightened
She brings me joy again, upon the star
That gracefully shot by me
And left its mark
Upon my

Soul

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Wow! Excellent Poem Russell! So well done :)
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July 31, 2017 at 5:53 AM
Soul uplifting my friend, Russell your poem is, full of love and beauty! Superbly written!
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July 31, 2017 at 3:57 AM
A star struck verse my friend...very creative...^WW^
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