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poem submitted to "Leaves of LIfe" poetry contest, Hiya Sharma, sponsor, 9/15/2026

in response to when the soul stars dream and die....

“My scar is where the Universe remembered its light.” (quote by poetess)

 

Star Scar

when the soul-stars  
   dream  
      and die,  
their dusk-dust  
   drifts  
      like dew-light  
         into my skin~  
a wisp-woven  
   whisper-seam  
      the cosmos  
         stitched  
            in secret  

O star-scar,  
   soft  
      as a silver  
         spell,  
you shimmer  
   in the hush  
      between  
         heartbeats~  
a moon-mended  
   memory  
      of the moment  
         the universe  
            unraveled  
               and then  
                  re-threaded  
                     itself  
                        through me  

I feel you  
   flicker~  
a faint  
   feather-flare  
      of fire  
         rising  
            through  
               the rift  

not pain,  
   but aurora~ 
      a pale
         pulse  
         of returning  
            radiance  

when the cosmos  
   unstitched 
      its silver  
         script  
across my back,  
I thought  
   the void  
      would swallow  
         every vowel  
            of me  

but the universe  
   is a patient  
      phoenix-seamstress~ 
she gathers  
   fallen starlight,  
      glimmer-grain  
         by glimmer-grain,  
and lays it  
   gently  
      in the seam  
         where I once  
            broke  

now twilight  
   trails  
      its caramel-calm  
         along my spine,  
and the scar  
   glows  
      like a soft  
         star-stitch 
            sigal~  
a place  
   where breaking  
      became  
         breath

O mythic mark,  
   moon-kissed,  
      meteor-bright,  
you are the lull  
   between galaxies,  
the lantern-lit  
   lullaby  
      the sky  
         forgot  
            to sing  

and when  
   the soul-stars  
      dream again,  
their dusk-dust  
   shimmers  
      through the seam~  
a quiet  
   quiver  
      of cosmic  
         remembering  

I rise  
   in that
      whisper-white
         wonder,  
a unicorn-ethereal  
   ember,  
      phoenix-fine,  
         learning  
            once more  
to live  
   in the light  
      that lingers  
         after  
            dying
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