Star Magnolia In Spring

Star
Magnolia
Waited, patient
Then rain sunlight warmth came
Beauty

Buds 
That filled
Slowly months
In advance burst forth stars
Delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:57 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
Clark Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:18 AM
Magnificent flower! Wll said Sara! Love Jeralynn
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March 16, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Beautiful words. I used to have a magnolia tree in the house where I raised my daughters. Here in the woods, I have a Loblolly tree, but haven't seen it bloom yet, but it's growing. I enjoyed this cinqku. Thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Sincerely, Dane Ann
James Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 4:00 AM
very interesting read. I may have to try this style! Thanks for my comments. Gareth
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