Star Look Girl

This 
visionary girl
notes the
space
rapt ...
This 
sidereal girl
reaps visions
astral
enraptured ...
This girl
that I love
truly is
phenomenal:
has stars
in the look ...!
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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Hello Alakas Poetry, to me this sounds like a romantic poem. Salute Darlene Have a nice evening my dear friend.
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August 28, 2020 at 6:15 AM
Hello Alakas, this is romantic. Wow! That girl made you feel that way! Yes that can happen. Salute Darleneenjoy your day my dear friend. Darlene.
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August 27, 2020 at 6:49 PM
Yes it is about a girl a met at the beach once and she made me think this way...Spatial romantic indeed... xxxooo salute my dearest alkas
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