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All through the long December nights we felt the winter’s presence - pure, pristine under a starry sky and when the snow fell - shimmering like the birth of angels you gave me your lofty promise - eternal love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/22/2019 4:41:00 PM
This was sweet tender and moving. Beautifully written. You convey so much warmth in a wintery description. This was a pure joy to read. Thank you for sharing this
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/22/2019 5:10:00 PM
So happy you enjoyed it,JC: Thanks for your kind comment and a big WELCOME to Poetrysoup. SuZ
Date: 8/17/2018 5:33:00 AM
Great poem. Very sincere and sweet poetry here!! -JWE
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Date: 6/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
This poem glorifies the beauty of the heavens Suzanne. It is lovely! : )
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Date: 1/12/2018 2:14:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2018 9:06:00 AM
This is beautiful and inspiring, Suzanne. Somehow it brings me a sense of joy and serenity. A pleasure to be reading it for the second time:) Regards // paul
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Date: 1/10/2018 12:02:00 PM
Sweet and beautiful Suzanne.
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Date: 1/6/2018 5:39:00 PM
This is really beautiful Suz! I am so happy I visited your pages to find this new addition. It is also how I feel about snow fall which I never have the opportunity to see anymore in person. I hope you are having a great new Year. Your poem is so inspiring. Much Love, Connie xxoo
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:10:00 AM
I am so happy you enjoyed my late entry into your December Challenge. I am hoping 2018 will bring the re-awakening of my Muse so I can contribute again here and at Poetryforthought. Have a wonderful New Year, Love SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 3:07:00 PM
I hope he exceeded his lofty promise. Thanks for your visit SuZ.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:15:00 AM
Hi Rich: Thanks for reading and commenting. My New Years resolution is to write more. We shall see what the Muse grants me LOL. SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 2:52:00 PM
- Happy New Year, SuZ - Thanks for this lovely and sweet poem ... I enjoy it :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:22:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise: Thanks for stopping by. Wishing you a very happy & healthy New Year. SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 11:49:00 AM
Lovely poem Suzanne--quite a romantic touch...may the lofty promise come true.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:24:00 AM
Hi Vijay: wonderful to see you. May your New Year bring you all that you are wishing for, Hugs, SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 11:32:00 AM
Lovely piece Suzanne, "snow shimmering like the birth of angles" wonderful line,,,
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:56:00 AM
Hi Charlie: Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy New Year and all my best wishes. SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful this is! Congratulations!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 6:59:00 AM
Hi Afolabi Thanks for stopping by. Wishing you all the best for the New Year,SuZ
Date: 1/6/2018 10:47:00 AM
You've brought warmth to the cold--glad to see you writing again!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/7/2018 7:01:00 AM
Hi Craig: Let’s hope the New Year will be a great year for poetry. Wishing you all the best. SuZ

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