Star In the Night

Shooting star
across the dark night sky
much to ponder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 24, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Like this one Jack, like to ponder under those stars. Have a good weekend. Love Alexa
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September 25, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Alexa for your kind comments...with lovel....old Jack
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September 17, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Lovely thoughts there, Jack. Yes, as you say, there are some members like that - but why let them bother you, my friend?
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September 17, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Also I am not much upset about the contest I entered, it is the others that have been mistreated that gets me. Thank you again sir Jack my friend.
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September 17, 2011 at 8:57 PM
Thank you sir Jack my friend for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack...they bother me because the judge the person not the writing. I have only entered one contest and I didn't even get an honorable mention. And I know that Constance and Cory have both been upset about the judging they have received.
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August 20, 2011 at 6:48 PM
Yes...I can see it in my mind's eye...now I'll consider it most of the evening. Loved it Jack! Caryl Ramsdale
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August 20, 2011 at 8:05 PM
Thank you once again Sir Caryl, much apprecitated.....with love....old Jack
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August 8, 2011 at 11:38 PM
...hope my wishes will come true, :) a nice read.
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August 9, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so very much lovely Lady for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
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July 30, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Like the closing line, indeed leaving the reader with something to ponder. Nice one. Thanks for sharing it and for your kind comment. Karen
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July 31, 2011 at 4:23 PM
Thank you lovely Lady for your kind comments, much appreciated...God bless...old Jack
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July 30, 2011 at 6:53 PM
There sure is much to ponder Jack, especially where they come from :)
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July 30, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Mr. James Fraser for you kind comments, much appreciated.....very true mate, suppose from the maker of stars...best wishes friend...old Jack
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July 28, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Jack thank you so kindly for you lovely comment on my poem Much love always Dawn:@)
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July 28, 2011 at 4:21 PM
Ps, i would have taken a wish for i have never seen a shooting star x Lovely write
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July 28, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Nicely worded my friend. Enjoyed it well. bl
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July 28, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Thank you very much for your kind comments, very much appreciated my friend bl, God bless....old Jack
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July 27, 2011 at 10:05 PM
this is lovely, Jack!
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July 28, 2011 at 12:53 PM
Thank you so much Lovely Lady for you kind comments, much appreciated....God bless....old Jack
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July 27, 2011 at 7:18 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morning..It is a rare thing for me to see a shooting star..This reminded me of the time in the last two or three years that I saw one...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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July 27, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Thank you so much lovely Lady......God bless....Old Jack
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July 26, 2011 at 9:16 PM
Lovely haiku with equally lovely images, Jack
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July 26, 2011 at 9:42 PM
Every time you comment on my poems it is a thrill, you are so gifted, thank you so very much Gentleman Dr Ram....appreciated much....Old Jack
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