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Star gazing

How distant stars sizzle, streaking in your eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2018 12:09:00 PM
What a gorgeous image.
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Date: 3/30/2018 7:49:00 AM
I'm glad it speaks to you! Thanks for reading and for commenting!
Date: 3/4/2018 2:36:00 PM
Hello Sarah,your haiku,is great. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/5/2018 3:10:00 AM
Hello Darlene. Thank you very much. I wish for you to have a lovely day as well!
Date: 3/4/2018 9:38:00 AM
Lovely haiku. Well done on your win Sarah! Well deserved!
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Date: 3/4/2018 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, very much.
Date: 3/2/2018 6:37:00 AM
Congrats on your winning Ku. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:10:00 AM
Thanks very much!
Date: 3/2/2018 5:18:00 AM
Sarah, Congratulations on your first place... inspired the following, thank you...Mick... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our closest star... the sun... it has a lifespan... earth will die with it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our planet's lifespan... once under natures control... pollution now rules... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ earth will die with it... sol will blow us all away... climate change preempts... ~~~~~~ © Mick E Talbot 2018
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Mick. I'm glad that my work was able to reach you.
Date: 3/1/2018 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on top win, Sarah!
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/1/2018 7:30:00 PM
Congrats for your win. Just like your shining star!
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:36:00 AM
Thank you so much ^^
Date: 3/1/2018 5:33:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Sarah.
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Date: 3/5/2018 3:11:00 AM
Thank you kindly!
Date: 3/1/2018 4:50:00 PM
A sizzler, Sarah! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/1/2018 3:09:00 PM
This haiku simply took my breath away. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/1/2018 3:05:00 PM
Nicely done, Sarah, congratulations on your win! <3
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