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Star Gazing

How distant
stars sizzle, streaking
in your eyes

imageryimaginationlightnaturestarshaiku

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Dale Gregory Cozart

March 29, 2018 at 12:09 PM

What a gorgeous image.

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen

March 30, 2018 at 7:49 AM

I'm glad it speaks to you! Thanks for reading and for commenting!

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 4, 2018 at 2:36 PM

Hello Sarah,your haiku,is great. have a nice day my friend.

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen

March 5, 2018 at 3:10 AM

Hello Darlene. Thank you very much. I wish for you to have a lovely day as well!

Kudzai Mhangwa

March 4, 2018 at 9:38 AM

Lovely haiku. Well done on your win Sarah! Well deserved!

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen

March 4, 2018 at 11:39 AM

Thank you, very much.

Sara Kendrick

March 2, 2018 at 6:37 AM

Congrats on your winning Ku. Sara

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen

March 2, 2018 at 7:10 AM

Thanks very much!

Mick Talbot

March 2, 2018 at 5:18 AM

Sarah, Congratulations on your first place... inspired the following, thank you...Mick... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our closest star... the sun... it has a lifespan... earth will die with it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ our planet's lifespan... once under natures control... pollution now rules... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ earth will die with it... sol will blow us all away... climate change preempts... ~~~~~~ © Mick E Talbot 2018

I.Spit.Ink Saruhrosen

March 2, 2018 at 7:11 AM

Thanks Mick. I'm glad that my work was able to reach you.