Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Ode

Star Gazing

Star Gazing

As the darkness falls across the sky,
Stars start to shimmer very brightly.
Your eyes reflect them clearly,
Hiding your grief and pain.

At the ocean shore, you gaze the stars,
Reminding you about your dreams.
Awakening about your reality,
Wishing it was just a dream.

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Modupe Sefunmi October 2, 2016 at 7:20 AM Lovely write, I love the reality of the last two lines. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 2, 2016 at 8:49 AM Thank you Modupe

Samantha Withee May 26, 2016 at 2:32 PM Very nice well done Loved the last lines Nayda Ivette Negron Flores July 4, 2016 at 4:08 PM Thank you Samantha

Randolph Byrd April 3, 2016 at 10:59 PM Sobering impact please read my "power of friendship"as a counterbalance to the message in your poem. Hugs Randy Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 4, 2016 at 5:29 AM Thank you Randolph. I will read your poem

Chris Hagy April 2, 2016 at 8:28 PM Nice piece... love the last two lines! Nayda Ivette Negron Flores April 2, 2016 at 8:34 PM Thank you Chris

Aurore Severo July 28, 2015 at 11:27 AM very nice poem Nayda Ivette Negron Flores July 31, 2015 at 12:49 PM Thank you.

Ian Jones July 28, 2015 at 12:34 AM Lovely image and never a truer word said. Kind regards, Ian Nayda Ivette Negron Flores July 28, 2015 at 11:20 AM Thank you very much. My regards to you too.