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Star Gazing

Star Gazing As the darkness falls across the sky, Stars start to shimmer very brightly. Your eyes reflect them clearly, Hiding your grief and pain. At the ocean shore, you gaze the stars, Reminding you about your dreams. Awakening about your reality, Wishing it was just a dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/2/2016 7:20:00 AM
Lovely write, I love the reality of the last two lines.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/2/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Modupe
Date: 5/26/2016 2:32:00 PM
Very nice well done Loved the last lines
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/4/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Samantha
Date: 4/3/2016 10:59:00 PM
Sobering impact please read my "power of friendship"as a counterbalance to the message in your poem. Hugs Randy
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/4/2016 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Randolph. I will read your poem
Date: 4/2/2016 8:28:00 PM
Nice piece... love the last two lines!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/2/2016 8:34:00 PM
Thank you Chris
Date: 7/28/2015 11:27:00 AM
very nice poem
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/31/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/28/2015 12:34:00 AM
Lovely image and never a truer word said. Kind regards, Ian
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/28/2015 11:20:00 AM
Thank you very much. My regards to you too.

Book: Shattered Sighs