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Star Gazing

A bazillion stars twinkle in the night sky; pinpoints on black velvet, perfect jewels created by the universe for us to gaze upon in wonderment.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2015 7:49:00 PM

You saw MY number one poem and now I am seeing your BEST of best. Second time but it's still a gem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/30/2011 10:10:00 AM

Awesome image here, Carol. I made a black velvet gown that had the tiniest sequins on it. I wore it in a play and the director said it looked like stars "twinkling in the night." Beautiful poem for my favorites. Love, Carolyn

Emma Mantle

Date: 3/2/2011 8:03:00 AM

Love it! Em :)

Ryan Wegenast

Date: 2/28/2011 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:55:00 AM

Hope u are having a beautiful and happy Sunday Carol... filled with poetic words and luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 12:36:00 AM

wonderful, Carol. How did I ever miss seeing this one?

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2011 5:45:00 PM

How many zeros are there in a "bazillion"? Nice descriptiveness here.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 1:40:00 PM

You have created a nice visual of the sky with stars, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 1:36:00 PM

Such lovely words in this beautiful form Carol.. I have never written one myself but the beauty of this is so rare and intimate.. luv your title too luv.. thankxx for reading my contest entry and leaving your sweet comment..

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/24/2011 12:43:00 PM

lovely write..stars were on my mind today too..TAH

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2011 12:29:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara