Star Gazer

imperial evil rings the rebellions bell  
and awakens the rebels fight 
allow for a new tomorrow 
a skywalker will be in plain sight 
his mind as sharp and committed 
as the nail that split the force
a parasite of the night are we
 the padawan has chosen his course!




 BY Mark Taylor: ......Star Wars......

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Sandra Adams

September 8, 2013 at 2:39 PM

congrats on your win with this fine poem :)

Joseph May

September 6, 2013 at 4:17 PM

congrats on your win Mark

Skat A

September 6, 2013 at 9:24 AM

Hi Mark, yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not. Congrats! Love ~SKAT~

Mark Taylor

September 6, 2013 at 11:32 AM

Thanks for the comment, hope to take part in one of your contest soon!

Danesh Morgan

September 5, 2013 at 10:55 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Mark Taylor

September 6, 2013 at 11:29 AM

Thank You, congrats to you as well.

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2013 at 6:04 PM

Hello Mark, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer

Mark Taylor

September 6, 2013 at 11:28 AM

Thanks for hosting this contest it was fun!