Richard Lamoureux Poet Verse

Star Dusted Coffee

Sprinkled stardust in your coffee
As I watched you sit next to me
Sip and let the dust flow through
As star light flows out of you
Enhancement of your beauty
Exposing the mystery
Sprinkled stardust in your coffee
As I watched you sit next to me


Nette's
Stardust in an Octelle contest

I could not find the form on poetry soup.
First attempt at this form, hopefully got it right.
By Richard Lamoureux

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Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:19 PM I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT........ <3 Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2013 at 6:11 AM Thanks again SKAT

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2013 at 4:39 PM Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2013 at 6:12 AM Hi Sara, thanks for your thoughtful comments.

Bl Devnath July 16, 2013 at 12:27 PM Congrats on your win my friend. A beautiful stardust enjoyed. Loved always, bl Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2013 at 6:12 AM Thanks BL

Eileen Manassian July 15, 2013 at 11:38 PM :) Congrats, Richard...Yes, it is good to be in such wonderful company! Glad to share this spot with you....Sweet dreams... Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2013 at 6:28 AM My pleasure Eileen , it is an honor when it is with a poet as talented as yourself. ( and as nice as well)

Shadow Hamilton July 15, 2013 at 7:02 PM hi Richard congrats love your poem Shadow x smiles Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2013 at 6:26 AM Thanks Shadow, smiling back.

Laura Breidenthal July 14, 2013 at 9:47 PM I thought of this in a sort of twisted way... I imagined the stardust being the drug ecstasy... strange that it gave me an ominous effect??? Anyhow, I really like this verse. Always, Laura Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 6:50 AM Intresting thought upon retreading I can see how that could fit. Thanks for commenting.

Charmaine Chircop July 14, 2013 at 2:43 PM Very very sweet..Made me yearn for a cuppa : ) Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 6:51 AM Thanks Charmaine.

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2013 at 9:27 AM Passing through and read this briefly... kindly post as VERSE( as written in the rules), and repeat lines 1 and 2 in lines 7 and 8... best of luck, nice one,richard... my contest has only one entry left, go!.. :) hugggs Richard Lamoureux July 14, 2013 at 11:11 AM Thanks Nette you are a sweetheart.

Eileen Manassian July 14, 2013 at 7:44 AM Richard.....how beautifully sweet.....angel wings....I like that. :-D Richard Lamoureux July 14, 2013 at 7:53 AM Thanks, I found the form a bit restrictive but I think it turned out okay in the end.