Home » Poems » Mitch White » Star Date: 402012.355

Star Date: 402012.355

We have left you many cave drawings
Built the Great Pyramids everywhere
How dare you ignore our many signs
Stonehenge is our Stargate tether

We left you some of our technology
Which in ways was obviously hoarded
Building blocks of peace and prosperity
We see now has been utterly distorted

There will be a time for this reckoning
Our belief in humankind still remain
We hear billions of you minds beckoning
We are coming now to provide a change

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2011 10:42:00 PM

great sci fi. you are another one I don't get to see much anymore,Congrats on making it into finals with this one.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mitch. Love Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2011 11:41:00 AM

Cute..Someone is coming soon and very soon...Keep up the humorous work..Congratulations on being featured this week..Sara

Joshua Peck

Date: 1/14/2011 3:28:00 AM

very interesting write

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Mitch. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 1/12/2011 1:11:00 PM

I thought Carolyn Devonshire would pick up on this one. Good write. Congrats on the selection. dave

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/10/2011 10:40:00 PM

very intriguing write, makes the reader think about what we are doing here. well written. congratulations on your feature this week --Madison

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/10/2011 6:26:00 PM

Any science fiction fan should marvel at this uniquely fascinating poetic presentation. Live long and prosper!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 6:46:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv... hope u are doing well .. H.N.Y ..

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/21/2010 7:04:00 PM

You should try sci fi or an outre short story, Mitch! I do believe that you could pull together something worthwhile! You seem to have an intrinsic feel for it! Good luck and Best wishes from Gerard.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 1:50:00 PM

AWESOME, Mitch! I do believe alien races left use signs (pyramids, Nazca lines) as well as technological insight. Perhaps 2012 will be the "star date" when they return to see how we used (or abused) the influences they left behind. This one goes to my favorites. It's a far out concept, and I mean that in a great way. Best wishes in the 2012 contest with this amazing poem! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/27/2010 10:18:00 AM

I love your title for this piece Mitch, with interesting and thought provoking content as well :) Ps: I had a "it wouldn't hurt to try mood" (",) your comment made me lol . Your dog/cat sounds cute