Star Crossed Lovers

A familiar tale so oft told
of one so shy .. the other bold
an affair that started in the rain
was love a consequence or pain?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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September 2, 2023 at 11:31 AM
Was love a consequence of pain, that last line is so evocative. Very well written quatrain. I love how deep this is. Sometimes we get into relationships while drenched in rain, or vulnerable. Which could make one wonder. Intriguing and moving write that made me feel alot
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