Star

Once upon a time,
I wished upon a star,
That very little star,
Went very, very far,
It went over all the mountains,
It went through all the seas,
It went across all the canyons,
It went through all the trees,
I guess you want to know what I wished for,
I wished it a wonderful life,
A life of adventure and risk,
I wished it prosperity and no strife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 2, 2012 at 3:34 AM
Chalaina, what a wonderful write...I like your interpretation of wishing on a star...you wished for the star to have the wish...but there is so much more here...super job...big huggsss,deb
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