Stannie Genesis

Rough Draft

[Hook]

Despite all these doubts he shouts at the demons
From now on You cant talk me out of believing
He realized this the right time to get even
Cause he knows there is no sequel

Rough verse

feeling so helpless 
So doubtful of my financial welfare 
who the hell cares but I do 
there is a need to grind hard 9 to 9 
to find some dime 
for my family

In the midst of all, there comes my dream again

the desire to make money from what I love

it's the music  i use to fuse it with my brutal thoughts and suffering

but how? someone like me too far from america

go toe to toe with these juggernauts

Eminem, Kendrick Lamar, Cole, Nas, abel and Bruno mars

but you know what sometimes I feel confident

other days I feel like I'll not fit in mind playin games with me rock, papers but not scissors

coz I cant cut off these dark thoughts outta my vessel

I feel so restless

constant battle inside the oblongata and the grey matter

If I should take one step ahead and risk my life

or should I stay where I am stare my struggle

I don't know where to begin

unbearable it is
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Agustin Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 5:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Mile Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 5:14 AM
I appreciate it! May peace be upon you too!
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:51 AM
One step at a time might be a good place to start. Begin by expecting nothing...anything more than this is then just a bonus. Just keep on believing...and keep on writing of course. :) john
Mile Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:54 AM
I Appreciate it! My brother. Just starting out and feel free to criticize
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