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Stannie Genesis

Rough Draft

[Hook]

Despite all these doubts he shouts at the demons
From now on You cant talk me out of believing
He realized this the right time to get even
Cause he knows there is no sequel

Rough verse

feeling so helpless 
So doubtful of my financial welfare 
who the hell cares but I do 
there is a need to grind hard 9 to 9 
to find some dime 
for my family

In the midst of all, there comes my dream again

the desire to make money from what I love

it's the music  i use to fuse it with my brutal thoughts and suffering

but how? someone like me too far from america

go toe to toe with these juggernauts

Eminem, Kendrick Lamar, Cole, Nas, abel and Bruno mars

but you know what sometimes I feel confident

other days I feel like I'll not fit in mind playin games with me rock, papers but not scissors

coz I cant cut off these dark thoughts outta my vessel

I feel so restless

constant battle inside the oblongata and the grey matter

If I should take one step ahead and risk my life

or should I stay where I am stare my struggle

I don't know where to begin

unbearable it is


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Date: 8/13/2025 6:51:00 AM
One step at a time might be a good place to start. Begin by expecting nothing...anything more than this is then just a bonus. Just keep on believing...and keep on writing of course. :) john
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Date: 8/13/2025 6:54:00 AM
I Appreciate it! My brother. Just starting out and feel free to criticize

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