Standing Woman

She stands there Her heart all askew… Backless dress Russell Sivey Form Modern Senryu

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Donna Jones

Date: 2/7/2014 10:37:00 AM

Wow.....I wanna know what happens next! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2014 3:12:00 PM

hey, this is quite striking, both the image and the senryu!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/6/2014 8:43:00 AM

ah, love this clever one

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/5/2014 3:47:00 PM

Very nice RS, wonderful imagery! "7"!!! Well done!//Sinclair

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/5/2014 2:13:00 PM

my, a sultry woman waiting for someone who never came?... a blast of a senryu in its brevity, russell... fine job!. huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2014 7:49:00 AM

Interesting work..Not at all sure of the interpertation..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/5/2014 12:22:00 AM

In reading this, I get the idea that a man has stood her up and made her look like a fool. Few words, but they collectively convey a lot of descriptiveness.