Standing Upon Timeless Thoughts

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Incongruent realities thru timeless mist, Pursuant pleasures are truly missed… Forever looking within horizons lost, Endeavor endless of loves tossed… Hearts broken between blackened veils, Parts shattered leaving lachrymal trails… Secluded symphonies were quietly playing, Occluded occupants of sacrificial slaying… Time displacing illusions of distant dreams, Sublime seductions descending moonbeams… Desires disrupted by Venus of tugs pulling, Fires frozen exposing Neptune’s overruling… Aligning planets selfish serving of masters, Confining sorrows of deceiving disasters… Quarantine in consciousness amongst dunes, Foreseen futures falling on matriarchal moons. ...reversed Mist timeless thru realities incongruent, Missed truly are pleasures pursuant… Lost horizons within looking forever, Tossed loves of endless endeavor… Veils blackened between broken hearts, Trails lachrymal leaving shattered parts… Playing quietly were symphonies secluded, Slaying sacrificial of occupants occluded… Dreams distant of illusions displacing time, Moonbeams descending seductions sublime… Pulling tugs of Venus by disrupted desires, Ruling over Neptune’s exposing frozen fires… Masters of serving selfish planets aligning, Disasters deceiving of sorrows confining… Dunes amongst consciousness in quarantine, Moons matriarchal on falling futures foreseen. Nov.01.2019 Anything You Want Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Placed 4'th...Thank You

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Date: 11/3/2019 6:03:00 PM
Woah...this must've taken a while. A skilled craftsman you are then. Very impressive!
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Date: 11/3/2019 2:38:00 PM
wow amazing and well deserving placement sweet WW, congrats! x:)-luloo
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Date: 11/3/2019 1:36:00 PM
W W, you ole jiggernaut, you really nailed it but still only got a 4th instead of a 1st. That's more than I ever got from Chantelle. I get nothing but N/A from her. Best way to deal with it is not enter any more of her contests. Then, I won't be disappointed.
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Date: 11/3/2019 8:00:00 AM
- Woow ... skillfully done my friend W.W. ... impressive :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2019 2:21:00 PM
Your words are the best of the best and the rhyming of them is impeccably wise.
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Date: 11/2/2019 7:16:00 AM
loved the audio, sounded so much better than how i read it..
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Date: 11/2/2019 7:13:00 AM
I like the REVERSE...for me it flows better...
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Date: 11/2/2019 1:46:00 AM
I think we will all be left standing on these timeless thoughts for they are very captivating and intriguing. Creatively cool and colorful crafting, ^WW^ ~ nice job and good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 11/1/2019 2:27:00 PM
Wow, talk about creative art...you blew my mind with this one my friend. How you ever did that is beyond me and way above my pay grade. Best wishes in the contest.
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