standing tall

and then her magic mountains were covered forever
petit morts had faded into memories of a pleasurable past
pushing and pulling were over as the truth settled in

yet rock bottom is where and when you stop digging
the valley is surrounded by peaks and anticipation
faith would reveal passion and love once again

patience my friend and chakras will open once more
temporary closure in surrender and acceptance
yields new openings beyond his wildest dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 11:07 PM
Nature imagery, such as a "valley... surrounded by peaks," illustrates that periods of low energy or sadness are temporary and surrounded by upcoming opportunities for growth. A deep descriptive poem.
Neumann Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Victor. Have a blessed weekend. XXX
Rodrigues Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 5:21 AM
petit morts had faded into memories of a pleasurable past…so interesting!
Neumann Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Thank you Kim. Sending you loving wishes, Kai
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