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Standing Strong

a flock of Goldfinch
             arrive at the bird feeder
           small, but standing strong

Heidi Sands

3/13/22

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Caren Krutsinger

April 5, 2022 at 1:29 PM

I need to refresh my memory of what a goldfinch looks like now.

Heidi Sands

April 5, 2022 at 2:06 PM

They are small and male are bright yellow with black wings. Thank you Caren :)

Harry Horsman

March 23, 2022 at 8:01 PM

Small but big on praise, You certainly bring this out in this wonderful haiku.

Heidi Sands

March 25, 2022 at 6:51 AM

Thank you very much Harry. I hope all is well and you have a nice day today :)

Jennifer Proxenos

March 22, 2022 at 2:08 AM

A flock feel safe and so would feel strong as well always safety in numbers. Well penned my friend. Hugs blessings Jennifer

Heidi Sands

March 22, 2022 at 6:29 AM

True Jennifer. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. Hugs :)

Kim Rodrigues

March 21, 2022 at 12:42 PM

Together they are strong!

Heidi Sands

March 21, 2022 at 1:11 PM

Yes, they are Kim. And they stand tall fluttering wings to show it :)

Silent One

March 14, 2022 at 2:20 PM

A lovely haiku... such vivid imagery in only a few words..

Heidi Sands

March 14, 2022 at 2:31 PM

Thank you Silent One. I hope your day is going well :)

Debra L Brown

March 13, 2022 at 2:37 PM

Hi! Hedi, I always enjoyed the goldfinches when they came to the bird feeder. I enjoyed the haiku. You painted a nice picture with so few words. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands

March 13, 2022 at 3:29 PM

I loved your garden poem. I commented and then went back to save it as a Fave :)

Heidi Sands

March 13, 2022 at 3:27 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this Thank you for the kind comment Debra. Blessings :)