Standing People Ii

Waving winds wrap
round upstretched arms
thick with spring green foliage.

Fat and round
tall and thin
olive and lime
pine green
people the view
with their majestic silence.

Comes a breeze they whisper,
rustle branches, nod,
sway, dancing, bobbing
taking turns
as breeze passes on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 2:09 PM
I love the delicate quality in this poem, Sue. Very nice indeed! Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Great poem, Sue...One can feel the breeze! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend :)...Gert
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Very flowing words Sue and the breeze so pleasant too.. such visual lines and phrases .. so enjoyed such a wonderful creative write..nice u are back .. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sue. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Oh my......what a gorgeous poem....it breathes quietly. Love this one, Sue!!! :)
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