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Standing People Ii

Waving winds wrap round upstretched arms thick with spring green foliage. Fat and round tall and thin olive and lime pine green people the view with their majestic silence. Comes a breeze they whisper, rustle branches, nod, sway, dancing, bobbing taking turns as breeze passes on.

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Date: 6/15/2010 2:09:00 PM
I love the delicate quality in this poem, Sue. Very nice indeed! Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:47:00 AM
Great poem, Sue...One can feel the breeze! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend :)...Gert
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:42:00 PM
Very flowing words Sue and the breeze so pleasant too.. such visual lines and phrases .. so enjoyed such a wonderful creative write..nice u are back .. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:09:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Sue. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2010 8:31:00 AM
Oh my......what a gorgeous poem....it breathes quietly. Love this one, Sue!!! :)
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