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Standing Out

Riding on a highway, As the cars go streaming by, I notice varied brands and styles I can’t identify. To me, they mostly look the same, The SUV’s and such, With different shapes of taillights Which don’t really matter much. The vehicles are mostly dark, Though quite a few are white And sometimes there’s a burgundy Or red that one can sight. Yet once in a great while, There’s a sports car or a jeep In a neon green or orange To which every eye will leap. That attention’s what the owners Wanted, like a little spark, But it sure must come in handy When in crowded lots they park.

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Date: 6/30/2025 2:24:00 PM
Your poem's conclusion is logical. / Maurice
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Date: 6/29/2025 1:03:00 PM
I am not good at identifying cares simply because it doesn't interest me lol, most of the cars over here seem to be silver. hugs Jan xx
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