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Standing On Ceremony

Visual effects of glares paint deliberate scores of idleness- Broken from silence and broke in to pieces I feel myself sinking Slipping Away Breathless I'm choking In your blood I am soaking Provoke in me loathing Exploding Corroding I feel my soul shrinking AS I GIVE IT AWAY!!! Iniquity in me All is crimson what I see I bid you less mercy As I beg of you "Holiday" Standing on Ceremony My Greed and my Pride My Wrath gives me Lust in Me Want in me Died Placed Black Roses on my Grave Contest-- My Significant 2021 Poem. BY Beata Agustin 1-25-2022 3rd Place

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Date: 1/25/2022 10:02:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks so much for sharing your heart through this dramatic monologue of yours earnestly expressed in your excellent poetic style. Indeed, thanks for your participation. God bless you.
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Christian Alexander
Date: 2/14/2022 5:15:00 AM
hello, Thank you Beata, thank you for such great compliment.

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