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Standing In For God

Take my advice, And don't let your spouse, Think you can replace God in the scheme of things, As you will have a hard time explaining, That you have not been given the power, To change the the way the universe works, Make new rules that everyone else automatically must follow, Or to carry messages, that keep changing, between your spouse, And those who are expected to automatically agree, with all changes, Because you are standing in for God, And it does take some convincing for your spouse to accept, That as you have not done enough to be nominated for sainthood, You are ineligible for this role.

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Date: 10/8/2023 5:00:00 AM
Hey, I just tell them that "I am just another foul-mouthed saint"....
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David Smith
Date: 10/8/2023 10:10:00 AM
And does it work. Sounds like it is a common issue to those with a spouse. I think the problem must really get big if one spouse does not want to contract out the position. Nice to know there are others who say what they want. long live poets, who encourage others to think for themselves. Thanks for reading David in NZ

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