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Standing By the Lakeshore

Standing by the lakeshore as I smell the scent of rain your face drifts into my mind this evening again each raindrop whispers into my ears your beautiful name and reminds me of the words we shared years ago with them. I remember close eyed you used to listen to their song and with raindrops my fingers would start a journey long a journey across your face upto the beautiful chin those moments of love so precious I'm carrying within. Scent of rain always open a secret door in my heart your name is still there and will never depart I know one day time will close that door again until another evening comes with this nostalgic rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
Loved this Kash.....Seren
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Date: 4/1/2013 3:11:00 PM
Kash, wish this had placed higher. It is truly a well written poem and I will always remember that first line I gave you! Congrats. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:55:00 AM
Very beautiful Kash congrats....Donna
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Date: 3/31/2013 9:57:00 AM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Well done. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:12:00 PM
Kash, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2012 6:11:00 PM
Very touching and romantic!
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your placing in Brian's "#190"contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:46:00 PM
Impressive first line that Miss Andrea threw out there...now how about the pink angora sweater and the cinnamon tea.....hahahah...Flowing lines of delicacy! Truly enjoyed. Congrats, Kashi.
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Date: 7/22/2012 8:01:00 PM
So peaceful...beautifully written. Congrats!
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:51:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win, this is just fabulous, love the journey it takes...David
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:29:00 AM
Hey, way to go, Kash!! My opening line you asked for inspired a wonderful poem for you. Congrats on your win. One day I will have to post my own poem based on the lakeshore line! I think it was given to me in a challenge from shadowpoetry!
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Date: 7/22/2012 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. i love the romaticism in this one.
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Date: 7/21/2012 6:05:00 PM
Awesome and wonderful piece,Kash..Nice work,great entry..Congratulations on your superb win in the contest....keep flying good pal...
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Date: 7/21/2012 1:58:00 PM
a must-read again and again, kashi bud!... congrats on your fine win!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/21/2012 10:29:00 AM
I remember this beautiful poem, Kash. Congrats on another well-deserved win! :)) Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/21/2012 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on the win..enjoyed this lovely write:) Jag
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Date: 6/21/2012 1:27:00 PM
kashi.. you are my master jedi when it comes to syl count... favor, please.. could you give a short pointer/ suggestion on how to check syl count by commenting on my latest blog, " can i have 2 servings , pllease?'.. i'm judging blind for the first time in my contest; so many great pomes with wrong syl counts.. promise to give you another brotherly hugg!!.. thanks!
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Date: 6/15/2012 8:25:00 AM
A belated congrats, Kash! Sweet nostalgia! Your poem is beautiful. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Remembering A Lost Love" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 9:32:00 PM
KASH , congratulations in Gail's heartfelt contest ;-) Good night*PD
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:06:00 PM
you rammed it, kashi... special cheers to you for this super win, including the many others, .. so thrilled for you, you!!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/12/2012 9:06:00 PM
Great nota bene at the bottom....This is going down as one of my favs! Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:47:00 PM
ALL RIGHT!!!!! I'm really happy that first phrase you asked of me inspired this gorgeous poem for you, kashinath. BIG congrats to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/12/2012 3:16:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Kash... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 6/12/2012 2:51:00 PM
Excellent write ,Kash..Great job...Congratulations on your well deserved win...
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