Standing At the Gate

A crisp greeting of morning frost
welcoming me for a new day
soothing feeling of hopeful bliss
caressing the ruffled feathers of yesterday

Loneliness in time does fade
beautiful the song of tomorrow
how long I have waited
seeing your lovely vision once more

Holding you there but for an instant
lasting forever in eternities eye
never will I let you go, I love you
you, the flame that warms my heart

The end of a new journey draws near
bringing together the story of wandering souls
walking two different paths to the same destination
I'll be waiting for you at the gate....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 3/29/2010 6:43:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Careon. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Bathsheba..It has a special meaning one that I hold very dear to my heart.
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Date: 3/28/2010 8:04:00 AM
I like this a lot Careon - Thank so much for sharing - I love the last line as well -:)
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