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Standing Amid Thank-Fullness

To
                                                     day
                                                  I
                                               look 
                                             back
                                            and
                                             thank God
                                                for the present.
                                                  The present through
                                                       past and current
                                                          trials and
                                                              tribulations.
                                                                 Present through
                                                                   laughter which
                                                                     has become
                                                                    our strong foundation.
                                                                  To my dearest heart of hearts, it
                                                              doesn't go in vain the love you’ve
                                                        given to me.  And I myself must agree, that
                                                   as a man, I’m sincerely lucky to be me.
                                               Knowing that…When I stand…
                                          You stand
                                      then We stand
                                    becoming the
                                     singular while holding on
                                       to life hand in hand.
                                         Regretting not anew the treasures
                                           and experiences we’ve shared amongst
                                             each other with no one else
                                               to compare… And for that, 
                                                  I love you, I love you, I love you
                                                    And…
                                                       I
                                                         love 
                                                            you.




Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

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Holly Smith August 26, 2013 at 6:47 AM This was simply beautiful! Such a wonderful way to portray thankfulness and love. I feel a peace within your words. Excellent!

Cherie Thomas July 8, 2013 at 8:25 PM This is so lovely ink,,,, your words are magnetic!!! ~<3~ cheriex

Allan Koven July 6, 2013 at 4:13 PM Love spread over time and written that way. I really liked it.

Wilma Neels June 27, 2013 at 8:18 AM And I love this Pace :) Hope you are doing okay! Have a fabulous rest of your week :) tc Wilma

Nette Onclaud June 14, 2013 at 12:14 PM the shape of love carries me to feathered winds here and beyond... nice to read you again, pace.. a masterpiece!..:) huggs

Kenisha Shines June 13, 2013 at 10:41 AM very beautiful write :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 12, 2013 at 1:27 PM beautiful Pace xx

Twanna Irisha June 6, 2013 at 12:13 PM amazing. Love it.

Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 6:35 AM airy type of structure, i see when you're alone just writhing this. love it---Elai

Claiborne Randle May 20, 2013 at 12:20 PM beautiful Pace...absolutely beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2013 at 9:18 AM - Hope you are doing fine, long time since I heard anything from you. - All the best to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A May 10, 2013 at 8:55 PM Ink, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: it is very special. a very nice aster feel. .. and the ending, love is playing in my mind over and over. very sweet. it was nice reading your poem.... always~ Linda

Ndaba Sibanda May 7, 2013 at 1:48 PM This is very artistic . A beauty.

Elai Cee May 3, 2013 at 10:44 AM this awesome!

Ale A A April 28, 2013 at 5:46 PM I give thanks with you and recognize that he should be honored. Also such creativity with the shape. I see a soul extended to the above.

Shining Bright April 27, 2013 at 5:49 AM Outstanding creation of Almighty's creation, you. loved the read beautifully flow. thank you for sharing and God Bless.

Valerie The Heavy Hearted Poet April 23, 2013 at 12:23 PM Thanking God for the present through everything in our past is important...no need to ever be angry with our trials and tribulations for they make us who we are. Thank you for this beautiful piece.

Kenisha Shines April 21, 2013 at 12:54 AM veryy beautiful poem.loved it .have a great weekend :)

Laura Breidenthal April 17, 2013 at 5:18 PM What a perfectly awesome poem! GREAT JOB! I loved every word and the shape is really cool. So touching Pace! Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2013 at 1:16 PM - I admire that .... It is beautifully written and has a nice shape - well done Ink,G, !!!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Cherie Thomas June 11, 2013 at 9:08 AM I love this poem!!! For it's sincerity & beauty in words..thanks ink....meaningful words to.meditate on and lift our spirits and to give thanks is a true blessing:)