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Stand By Me

When your knees buckle, friends walk away. When you fly white knuckle, filled with dismay. When you've finally had your fill, your family deserts you. When you tire of picking up the bill, feeling like no one's true. Stand by me without fear, I'll stand by you, right here. When you are one, body and soul, place first with an amazing run. When you've achieved your goal, feel like you're finally done. When life's just right a bowl of cherries. When you feel your might like in your twenties. Stand by me we can celebrate, I'll stand by you, cheer your fate. When you just want to yell because your sick of following. When no one else hears the bell and you don't feel like mellowing. When the world is not too stark and you have no fear you'll lose face. When you finally make your mark or feel in love with the human race. "Stand by me?"you don't need to ask, I'll stand by you I don't wear a mask. Whether you're happy or sad I'll be there every time. Whether you feel good or bad I'll show up fast on a dime. Stand by me, do, I'll stand by you. 01~22~2015 Sponsor: Kelly Deschler Contest: Stand By Me

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Date: 4/8/2015 4:04:00 PM
How did you know, this is my favorite song. By BBKing..... i love what you did here.... better yet, I love your poetry before I read it. ... This is going to my faves.....Linda
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:29:00 AM
TRULY AWESOME POEM MY FRIEND. I hope that you have such a person(s) in your life as we all need that. A7 and truly this one is a ten in my opinion as message, flow and inspiration are tops..
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:42:00 PM
Hi Maurice,:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2015 7:53:00 AM
This is an awesome and wonderful poem. Its nice spending some time here.. It feels so quality and deserving. Great pen friend
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Armand. I really enjoyed your poem. Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations, For me it was a very good write!
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Date: 1/24/2015 9:15:00 PM
Lovely write on friendship, congrats on the win,
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:36:00 PM
Sometimes we just need to be our own best friend... I liked your unique idea for this poem and my contest theme. Very nicely written, Armand! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Kelly for my placement it is very appreciated.
Date: 1/24/2015 6:54:00 PM
I am honoured to have you as a true friend in my life Armand - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2015 12:13:00 AM
My goodness, from what you wrote in the top box, I was thinking this would be making fun of yourself. But it was not that way at all, Armand. It's a good solid poem about "stand by me." It's VERY good, and you have no reason to say it is not a well written poem, because that is just not true!!!
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Date: 1/22/2015 2:20:00 PM
So united we stand, for divided we fall...that's what true friends are for! hey! let's celebrate! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:56:00 PM
Everyone needs a true friend...and that you are
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:26:00 PM
Lovely poem Maurice, I will stand by you, that's what friends are for.......Seren
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Date: 1/22/2015 9:22:00 AM
Very nice approach to the theme, Mauroce
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Date: 1/22/2015 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful, the more we stand together, the less we will fall apart. Hugs.xxx.
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Date: 1/22/2015 6:34:00 AM
Stand by me and i ll stand by u... nice write...best wishes , nad!
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