Melanie Jennings Poet Rhyme

Stand By Me

When all the skies come falling down, 
i ask you 'stand by me'
when I'm in the clouds and won't look down
I pray just wait for me
When I'm far away with thoughts of woe
I ask you let me be
When I tell you just to up and go
I pray you will not leave
If the tides do change, one day they might
I ask will we be free
If the darkness lifts from day to night
I pray its you I'll see
If all the rain should rainbows make
I ask you let it be
but if all the skies come falling down
I pray you'll 'stand by me'

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Skat A February 1, 2015 at 1:48 PM MELANIE:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT

Joyce Johnson January 29, 2015 at 3:26 PM Congratulations Melanie on a solid win. Very nice. Thank you also for reading and commenting on mine.

Ed Belcher January 28, 2015 at 9:39 AM Congratulations Melanie!

Shane Cooper January 26, 2015 at 4:19 PM A great pen. congratulations on the win, well deserved. Shane xxx

Poesy Relish January 25, 2015 at 6:50 AM Congratulations on your win... beautiful write

Dr.Ram Mehta January 24, 2015 at 8:44 PM Very touchy and emotional expression, congrats on the win

Jan Allison January 24, 2015 at 6:30 PM Beautiful and emotional Melanie - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 24, 2015 at 6:16 PM Very beautiful and emotional, Melanie. I am sure that he would stand by you! Congratulations on your lovely win. #7 // paul

Kelly Deschler January 24, 2015 at 5:50 PM I loved the structure and wonderful rhyming in your poem. The emotions were expressed beautifully, Melanie. Congrats on your first place win!