Line Gauthier Poet Haiku

Stanby - Haiku Sequence

drab lackluster mood
brought on by somber winter
~ blue melancholy


few treasured sunrays
awaken dormant daydreams
~ hope lurks on standby



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on December 28, 2019 for contest KU DUET sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Evelyn Judy Buehler January 9, 2020 at 10:04 PM Congratulations on your win, Line. A fabulous ku duet! :) Line Gauthier January 10, 2020 at 7:48 PM Thank you so much, Evelyn. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2020 at 12:54 PM I like this Line. Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 3:30 PM Thanks, Connie. Most appreciated.

Paul Callus January 5, 2020 at 8:41 AM Beautifully expressed, Line! Those few sun rays are a guarantee that spring will visit when the time is ripe:) Congratulation son your top placement! Regards // paul Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper January 4, 2020 at 9:56 PM Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thanks, Eve,. Most appreciated.

Juliet Ligon January 4, 2020 at 9:07 PM This time of year can make some people feel without hope. Emotions well conveyed. Congrats! Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thanks, Juliet, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2020 at 5:44 PM very nicely done, and very nicely won!! Congrats, Line. Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 11:23 AM Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Jc Hawkens January 4, 2020 at 3:41 PM Wonderful Ku Duet Poem. I think you gave a Wonderful description of the somberness of winter. I love the wording and imagery. Congrats on a 1st place. JC

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 1:25 PM - A wonderful ku duet, Line :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 11:15 AM back to say congratulations on your high placement :) hugs Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:45 AM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Alexis Y. January 4, 2020 at 10:27 AM Hi Line, You painted good “somber” imagery with your words. Congratulations on your 1st place. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:46 AM Thanks, Alexis. Much appreciated.

John Hamilton January 4, 2020 at 7:55 AM Hope lurks on standby, very nice Line, congrats on your top win! Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:46 AM Much appreciated, John.

Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 7:21 AM Few treasured sunrays.. Wow..beautiful imagery..apt to the season.. Congrats on your win.. Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thanks, Jenish. Where is the sun?!

Kim Rodrigues January 4, 2020 at 7:03 AM A wonderful conglomeration of words! Congrats, Line! Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:47 AM Thanks, Kim.

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 6:45 AM I think many can relate to the melancholy of January.... we all await for sunshine..Congratulations on your first place in the contest.. Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:47 AM Yes, a deep craving for sunshine indeed. Thanks for the interesting contest, SO.

Caren Krutsinger December 31, 2019 at 1:05 PM "lurking on standby" is so easy to do! Line Gauthier January 4, 2020 at 11:48 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich December 30, 2019 at 5:38 PM nicely done. I especially like the ending on hope's note!! Line Gauthier December 31, 2019 at 2:57 PM Thanks, Andrea. Happy New Year!

Sandra Adams December 29, 2019 at 9:36 PM this is lovely line....beautiful imagery... best wishes in the contest :) hugs Line Gauthier December 29, 2019 at 10:16 PM Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Hello There December 28, 2019 at 7:56 PM Neat one, Line. Very Ku ;) I can relate :) Line Gauthier December 28, 2019 at 8:28 PM Hello there, thanks.

Heidi Sands December 28, 2019 at 6:08 PM Very nice Line. Hope lurks on standby :) Line Gauthier December 28, 2019 at 8:28 PM Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.