Stampedes 'Round the Kids

STAMPEDES 'round the screen, STAMPEDES 'round the kids, T H E Scritch scratch 'round N ! Their match. Everybody E i Aims to catch W ! Mom's batch of little gamers. P ! P E ! E D ! D END 'EM ALL Leave alone A STAMPEDES! our video kids! G O G I S T S

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2013 9:09:00 PM

you have such an imagination!! I see this also had won a contest a long time ago. Belated congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/3/2012 2:22:00 PM

Reminds me of the video games before all the graphics, even the font choice adds to the overall effect. This must have been a lot of work.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 1/13/2013 4:12:00 AM

O, Rick! Btw: I'd like to change the title "Stampedes 'round the screens" into "Stampedes 'round the kids"... How does it sound to your ears and gears? A question to the Question Man!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 1/13/2013 4:07:00 AM

So nice to re-read your kind comments, Rick! I'm on the way to visit you and your poems and your newest poetry forms today! Have a nice day! Blessings, Hanitra!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2012 8:32:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning entry Hanitra. Very clever!

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/24/2012 5:27:00 AM

Love this !! I see it won a contest as well !! Congrats !! I don't understand video games, but my grandchildren love them and spend way too much time playing them. I like this unusual poem...and how it stampedes all over the page !!