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Stampede: The Bitumen Blooms



“Stampede: The Bitumen Blooms” 

All the promises under the Sun
could never buy time, and 
all that glistens on a wrist in a heartbeat succombs

peels away the romance 
like tinfoil scraps, wrapped and cutting like razors
into the skin of what matters most

liked barbed wire 
around a wrist bleeding
glistening golden brands like some kind of reigning crown

the so-called pulse of keeping up with the J’s
will never deliver the most precious intangible, 
it burns inside out unseen

underneath the bitumen 
the buried truth blooms
strange journeys crawl 

and their animals released 
from the cage, 
eventually, 

stampede;

sacrifices are made. 



Candide Diderot. ‘25
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September 4, 2025 at 4:13 AM
"Chevrolet"/Robert Plant.
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September 4, 2025 at 4:31 AM
LYRICS/ "Chevrolet", Robert Plant. https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/robertplant/chevrolet.html
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September 4, 2025 at 4:13 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jq8vDzKdePg
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