Stalking Death

I rummaged through
the ancient ruins
and scoured
the carnage of our times;

I searched the scorching
expanse of the arid deserts,
I peeked into the crevices
of the broken hearts,
and probed the dark realm
of the deranged minds;

I looked in the dead ashes
of the funeral pyre,
I ransacked every nook and
cranny of the cemeteries
And forayed into the desolate
womb of the barren woman --
But did not find death!

I then looked at
the first flush of spring--
The blossoming flowers,
The fluttering butterflies
The humming bees,
The rising robust sun;
And found the hand of death.

I found death in the unyielding
faith of the trusting hearts,
In the ardent prayers
of the desperate souls,
And in the unbridled
passion of the heart;
Even in birth and
in the sprouting seed
I found the omnipresence of death.

yeah, I found death in life!


~'Death Shadow' contest by Justin Bordner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/7/2015 1:41:00 PM
What a righteous poem of transcendence, without the beauty of life death means naught! jill
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Date: 1/5/2015 3:25:00 AM
Lovely poem, beautifully written, congrats.
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:44:00 PM
WELL DESETVED WIN!!! congratulations!!! a fav!
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:06:00 PM
ABDUL, congratulations ON YOUR TOP WIN. LUV LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2014 7:53:00 AM
Undoubtedly a super-poetry on death. Well deserved win Abdul. Love-rajat
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Date: 12/25/2014 4:47:00 PM
Excellent write congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 12/25/2014 4:47:00 PM
Happy Holidays to you and yours!
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Date: 12/25/2014 7:54:00 AM
Brilliant piece, I am impressed. Congratulations and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/25/2014 6:08:00 AM
We are born to die and afterwards the judgment..Enjoyed your winning work..Way to go..It is very expressive and descriptive..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:57:00 AM
Outstanding !! Congratulations on an amazing, and gripping poem!
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:39:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your wonderful win in this contest. The twist mid-way in your poem was stunning with the realization that there truly is so much death in life. 7+ Fav, Sandra
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/24/2014 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/24/2014 8:28:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/24/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, if I 'May'?!
Date: 12/24/2014 2:14:00 AM
many congrats on your win :-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:30:00 AM
Very creative with interesting thoughts on death, Abdul
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