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Stalingrad Scope

Stalingrad 1942 City surrounded Bloodied human zoo Shattered buildings Architecture ruin Walls of peace Blasted and strewn In the rubble he crawls Suited white Background blend Silent For hours he lies Corpse still Eyes in focus Await his kill German Half-track Up ahead Scope fixed On the commanders head Range set Wind adjust Breathe in Shots a must Trigger squeezed Echo of sound Mosin-Nagant round Enemy bound In the blink of an eye Pace of it Bullet hits The hear of it Momentarily he stands In a swaying state Zaytsev,s shot Seals his fate As panic unfolds As to where the shot came This white uniformed assassin In his theatre domain This Ural peasant Soviet Hero In a battered Stalingrad Where moral was zero This silent killer Who seen out this war In Kiev city A Red Soviet Star http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/22/2009 2:24:00 PM
Awesome job James! I like how you took us though the steps of his actions. Very powerful! Nate
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:00:00 PM
WHAT SACRAFICE AND EMOTION HE ENDURED THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT WRITE
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Date: 5/22/2009 1:00:00 PM
WHAT SACRAFICE AND EMOTION HE ENDURED THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT WRITE
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Date: 5/22/2009 11:30:00 AM
Positively chilling, James. The reader can see every image and, although we are compelled to sympathize with the soldier clad in white, war knows not how to offer mercy. And to think this is a simple Ural peasant who would have probably been tending to crops or other ordinary pursuits if it had not been for the war, well...chilling! Love, Carolyn
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