Beata Agustin Poet Shape

Stairs of Victory

!In God's might*!!
!Victory ahead!!!
          !God empowers!
          !I do trust Him!!!
                    !On for service!!!
	            !Share blessings!
                                !God guides!!!
	         	        !He’s my light!
			                !Faith in His Word!
			     	        !Grace He gives!!!
     		                                  !God leads the way!
			     		          !I follow His steps!!!
                                                         !God is my beginning!
                                                         !In Him I must start!!!

*Daniel 2:20 ...Blessed be the name of God for ever and ever: for wisdom and might are his.

December 10, 2018
Honorable Mention, "Shape Poem" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper; judged on 12/15/2018.

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 7, 2019 at 6:38 PM Hello Beata, I like this poem. It is spiritual. Amen! have a nice evening my friend.

Line Gauthier December 16, 2018 at 4:22 PM Very clever technique to use the exclamation marks to achieve symmetry. Well done, Beata, and congrats!

Jan Allison December 15, 2018 at 6:57 PM congrats on your win Beata, :-) hugs jan xx Beata Agustin December 16, 2018 at 6:10 AM Praise God. Thanks compliments. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 15, 2018 at 4:10 PM - Congratulations on your great shape poem, Beata :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beata Agustin December 16, 2018 at 6:10 AM Praise God. Thanks for your comments, compliments, and wishes. God bless you.

Eve Roper December 15, 2018 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your placement, Beata. I really like the poem, but this is just me, I would have you not place the exclamation point in the front. For me, next time if I have a shape contest; I would rather you space the words a little farther to show shape. I thank you for entering my contest Shapes. Hugs Eve ~`*, Beata Agustin December 16, 2018 at 6:08 AM Thanks for the kind comments, gracious compliments, and the placement. I'm blessed being a part of your sponsored contest. God bless you.