Stairs

Stairs
					  ethereal steps
			      covered in woven kilim
		 leading upward toward the light
	   in glorious mystical-swept ascension
silently leading toward divine enlightenment
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Hi Linda:Very clever and I learned a new word. Bonus. SuZ
Roper Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:12 PM
nicely done my friend.
Fowler Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Thank you dear Eve. :)
Volumes Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 10:31 PM
I had to hold on as I was climbing down your poem, Linda. Ingenious, so well written and a lovely poem.
Fowler Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 7:17 AM
teehee guess I should have put in a handrail. :) Thank you Wen! :)
Daniel Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:28 AM
What an amazing write, Linda!
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:43 AM
You are so sweet Jo. Thank you for visiting and commenting! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 2:28 AM
- Lovely poem and shape, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Many thanks dear Anne-List! :)
Turner Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Stairs we each will travel. Nice one, Alice.
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 7:49 PM
Thanks my friend Daniel. :) ps: Shh! As I re-read it, I think I need to reverse the lines so that the ascension/upward movement leads to the top step.
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