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Staircase Race

March 21, 2015

you shan't win
not this day my furry friend
watch me run

head start - yeah!
close to end he leaps down ledge
watch him fly

staircase race 
wins and rubs it in my face
prissy proud prance

adventurebest friendcatcrazysenryu

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Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 8:45 AM

We have a Golden named Annie and 2 cats... Zoé (female) and Curtis (male)! The three of them get along famously and are totally amazing! Every day they do things that makes us wonder, "are they REALLY dumb animals"? Sorry for your loss! It will be a very sad day when we lose any of our three! Love, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal

April 19, 2015 at 4:01 PM

Cats are so smart! I loved my buddy. I miss him dearly, thank you for the visits - this poem means a lot to me. I have a new kitten at home. She is fluffy, and all black, her name is Ebbie. Wish I could get her a companion. Your kitties sound very sweet! ~Laura

Maurice Yvonne

April 9, 2015 at 5:14 PM

I am so sorry Laura for your loss. Our pets first steal our hearts. They then become our friends next our partners and quickly they become part of our family.

Laura Breidenthal

April 9, 2015 at 5:21 PM

Yes, Spy was my cat's name. He was very intelligent and playful - a great joy to have around. He was my little shadow, followed me everywhere. : ) His memory makes me smile. ~Laura

Maurice Yvonne

April 9, 2015 at 9:10 AM

This is amazing. I have to add this to my favs!

Laura Breidenthal

April 9, 2015 at 3:20 PM

You're kind Maurice, and thank you for the sweet visits! This is a favorite of my own, for it is about one of my best friends who passed away recently...I miss our little staircase races. He was a champ to the end. ~Laura

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