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For Nette Onclaud's Visions Of A Vignette 2 Poetry Contest

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staircase
ascending where
incandescent
stars are stalactites
hanging in a sapphire sky
of satin

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Len Gasun

Date: 6/27/2025 10:56:00 PM

So creative! Big Congrats on your top win and this gorgeous vignette my dear poet friend! Hugs!

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/27/2025 12:43:00 AM

A monumental work and well deserved pinnacle placement Howard

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2025 5:43:00 PM

this in the andie style i would go gooey for...alliteration, metaphor, poetic pauses...nice! thanks for joining my spree and congrats on your win, andie...effort appreciated!

Karen Jones

Date: 6/26/2025 3:02:00 AM

Beautifully written Andrea! Congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2025 1:51:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Danny Derden

Date: 6/25/2025 12:18:00 PM

This poem beautifully evokes a sense of wonder and ascent, transforming a simple staircase into a magical path towards a star-filled, sapphire sky. Its imagery is both elegant and imaginative.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/26/2025 9:20:00 AM

thanks so much, Danny

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/23/2025 3:09:00 AM

Andrea, This is spectacular in its scope and sheer elegance. Wishing you the very best in the contest Howard

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/23/2025 2:55:00 AM

Ahhh!! A very sophisticated work. Reads like a very good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 6/22/2025 5:33:00 PM

Gorgeous, Andrea. Love "stars are stalactites" <3

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/22/2025 1:59:00 PM

Your "Staircase" is a lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2025 10:44:00 AM

A beautiful write! I sit, looking up at the wonder, experiencing it before analyzing! Wondrous and perfect write! Fave!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/22/2025 11:14:00 AM

Wow. Thanks, Kim

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/21/2025 10:00:00 PM

What a magical and spellbinding poem this is dear Andrea! I love how beautifully you've chosen words here, making a seamless flow of alliterations that really allure the heart and I could actually imagine that staircase ascends in the satin sapphire skies. So gorgeously done for the contest! Sending you best wishes! I have been unwell and that's why slowly catching up. Hope you've been doing good these days :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/22/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thanks I think I was thinking of that song stairway to heaven

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/21/2025 8:01:00 PM

Just delightful, Andrea! What beautiful, fresh and creative images on the order of your pear fashionistas! Thank you for sharing your immense talent that you so generously share. Blessings, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/22/2025 11:15:00 AM

Thanks, dearie

Staircase

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