Stained Love

Emotional me
is out from my verbose head
like a winter flower with
petals, so much like
hankies of a sleepless god,
to wave in such elegance
my charm over you,
again and again, ‘til your
smile, left to death by the strides
of your rococo
lover, is awakened and
becomes my choka poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 7:25 AM
mmm ... wow ... this is the essential meaning of good poetry ... awesome imageries, so nuanced with references ... indeed a privilege.
Tugaff Avatar
April 14, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Hello Mr. Poet, how lovely poem in a choka form. Congratulations. Ernilando
Mason Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 10:33 AM
What is "choka"? Well, its a mysterious, beautiful write from Ernesto ... smile ... when is your birthday my friend? I'd love to blog/sing for you!!
P. Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 2:57 AM
you've touched my heart with this write, Ernesto! this one is so CUTE! ~ Arany
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