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Stained Love

Emotional me is out from my verbose head like a winter flower with petals, so much like hankies of a sleepless god, to wave in such elegance my charm over you, again and again, ‘til your smile, left to death by the strides of your rococo lover, is awakened and becomes my choka poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 7:25:00 AM
mmm ... wow ... this is the essential meaning of good poetry ... awesome imageries, so nuanced with references ... indeed a privilege.
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Date: 4/14/2009 7:06:00 AM
Hello Mr. Poet, how lovely poem in a choka form. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 4/7/2009 10:33:00 AM
What is "choka"? Well, its a mysterious, beautiful write from Ernesto ... smile ... when is your birthday my friend? I'd love to blog/sing for you!!
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:57:00 AM
you've touched my heart with this write, Ernesto! this one is so CUTE! ~ Arany
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