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Stain The crusades stain pure hearts Blood drips on graves Morning fog evil rises another stain on humanity

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/22/2018 1:13:00 AM

Epic poem and oh so true.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/15/2018 9:31:00 AM

Stained is Humanity when evil hearts reign! A beautiful heartfelt write. A pleasure to read. Be blessed Arthur.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/14/2018 7:26:00 AM

Sadly the fabric of humanity is both ripped and stained in several places. Well expressed Art.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2018 6:48:00 PM

reminds me of templars and quests for some obsessed missions, arthur... still, it was an era we needed to go through for healing... amazingly rendered in verse form, i think...huggs

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/11/2018 6:51:00 PM

Medieval darkness stains on the future...Really creative...All the best Arthur

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/11/2018 6:08:00 PM

A very deep poem, despite it's shortness. Love how you distilled the meaning down to few words. (It is, however, not a triolet.)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/11/2018 10:19:00 AM

another stain on Humanity ,,, so true...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/11/2018 8:08:00 AM

Stain is such a loaded word, I knew there'd be weight to this one before I opened it, you doth not dissapoint dear poet. xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2018 5:57:00 AM

will drop by again to see the pic!:-) I don't think it's a triolet - am not fond of that form anyway lol )hugs jan xx